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The second freaking breeder in Straberry Land
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The second freaking breeder in Straberry Land
by Mistress Truth Sat May 25, 2013 4:20 pm
Name: Lilly Lossom (X3 cliche-ish name)
Age: 12
Gender: Female
Occupation: Breeder
Personality: A somewhat cold, socially....awkward, girl. However, she loves being around Pokemon and they adore her. She also likes being alone in nature, and she often spens her time in the Hollophyll Forest, near Redwood Village. She loves being at the Day-care too, but she doesn't have the opprotunity to go there much. She dislikes being stuck in crowds and will try to leave the vicinity of even a small crowd of humans. She hates having to knock out Pokemon, but if they attack her few friends, she will beat them down without mery.
Appearance:
Extra:. Strawberries are her favorite friut. She hopes to one day have a Bellossom.
Age: 12
Gender: Female
Occupation: Breeder
Personality: A somewhat cold, socially....awkward, girl. However, she loves being around Pokemon and they adore her. She also likes being alone in nature, and she often spens her time in the Hollophyll Forest, near Redwood Village. She loves being at the Day-care too, but she doesn't have the opprotunity to go there much. She dislikes being stuck in crowds and will try to leave the vicinity of even a small crowd of humans. She hates having to knock out Pokemon, but if they attack her few friends, she will beat them down without mery.
Appearance:
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But most of the time she just wears a sundress that looks like the skirt. She has a lot of the same outfit...Like Candace! Her clothes are(most of the time) spattered in mud from the Hollophyll Forest. She hates runners and almost always weras boots or flip-flops. She's like, a jeans-o-phobic and therefore will never wear them.
Extra:. Strawberries are her favorite friut. She hopes to one day have a Bellossom.
Last edited by Mistress Truth on Mon May 27, 2013 4:41 pm; edited 4 times in total
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Re: The second freaking breeder in Straberry Land
by BlueKat12 Sat May 25, 2013 4:30 pm
Please fix these:
Personality: How does your character act around others? Is he or she insane, by chance? Please, at least a five sentence paragraph.
Only four sentences, even then it doesn't tell much about her. You have history mixed in with personality.
History: How was your character raised and where does he or she live? Why did he or she want to come to the region and/or start his or her journey? As always, five sentence paragraph minimum.
Only Four sentences, please elaborate more. Also please give details on the oddish, it's moves, gender, nature, ect.
Personality: How does your character act around others? Is he or she insane, by chance? Please, at least a five sentence paragraph.
Only four sentences, even then it doesn't tell much about her. You have history mixed in with personality.
History: How was your character raised and where does he or she live? Why did he or she want to come to the region and/or start his or her journey? As always, five sentence paragraph minimum.
Only Four sentences, please elaborate more. Also please give details on the oddish, it's moves, gender, nature, ect.
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Re: The second freaking breeder in Straberry Land
by BlueKat12 Sat May 25, 2013 5:30 pm
Please fix these:
Personality: How does your character act around others? Is he or she insane, by chance? Please, at least a five sentence paragraph.
You have even fewer sentences than before. Describe her personality, how she is like. Is she arrogant? Shy? Does she do well in bad situations? Does she make poor choices?
Rule Broken: Your starter pokemon MUST start from level 5 (They cannot have egg, tutor, or TM moves) and you can only have one! However, if you have come from the Feronia website, you may transfer your character over to here and keep all information.
Your pokemon may not have a TM as a move. Also please give your pokemon's nature.
Personality: How does your character act around others? Is he or she insane, by chance? Please, at least a five sentence paragraph.
You have even fewer sentences than before. Describe her personality, how she is like. Is she arrogant? Shy? Does she do well in bad situations? Does she make poor choices?
Rule Broken: Your starter pokemon MUST start from level 5 (They cannot have egg, tutor, or TM moves) and you can only have one! However, if you have come from the Feronia website, you may transfer your character over to here and keep all information.
Your pokemon may not have a TM as a move. Also please give your pokemon's nature.
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Re: The second freaking breeder in Straberry Land
by BlueKat12 Mon May 27, 2013 4:13 pm
Sorry about this not being enforced before, it IS a requirement but we have just been failing to enforce it until now(IMMA TERRIBLE ADMIN T-T)
Appearance: How does your character look? Tall or short, fat or thin? Adding clothes are optional, but at least say the style of what your character wears (fancy, casual, a certain color, ect.). A five sentence paragraph minimum.
Although you DO have a picture, you certainly can't expect her to wear that all the time. Unless she has the same outfit several times. Just fix this and you meet the requirements
Appearance: How does your character look? Tall or short, fat or thin? Adding clothes are optional, but at least say the style of what your character wears (fancy, casual, a certain color, ect.). A five sentence paragraph minimum.
Although you DO have a picture, you certainly can't expect her to wear that all the time. Unless she has the same outfit several times. Just fix this and you meet the requirements
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Re: The second freaking breeder in Straberry Land
by BlueKat12 Mon May 27, 2013 4:31 pm
Appearance: How does your character look? Tall or short, fat or thin? Adding clothes are optional, but at least say the style of what your character wears (fancy, casual, a certain color, ect.). A five sentence paragraph minimum.
You need five sentences MINIMUM you only have two. Try describing your character in words.
You need five sentences MINIMUM you only have two. Try describing your character in words.
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Re: The second freaking breeder in Straberry Land
by BlueKat12 Mon May 27, 2013 4:42 pm
You've met the requirements!
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Be sure to update your character records!
~Accepted by BlueKat12~
Be sure to update your character records!
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